replu and tell me what you think of it...


sometimes i just can't take life and wanna die


knowing i might lose an important person to me i just want to cry


i know whatever happends we'll be meeting each other up in the sky


i still need her here i don't want to tell her my last good bye


one of the nicest sights i've seen is shooting stars and the moon



thinking about my friend who's like my sister wishing she doesn't have to go away soon


she can always make me smile when i'm down


she means everything to me that's why i want her to stay around


i wonder why it couldn't be me dying instead of you


you are alwas there for me i know that your friendship is true


to my sister this is for you don't leave me without you i don't know what would i do

damn nobody replied lol

Short but sweet - It's not a famous poem but as long as you get the feeling across then it's not bad!

I'm no poet myself, I did try to write a girl a poem once, ended up being 5 pages - way too obsessive, after I gave it to her I realized my stupidity. When she turned me down I was glad, because half of the things I wrote about in the poem I didn't even mean!

Cya

Hey bro.., it nice but as long as it from the bottom of ur heart, sincerity always touches the heart. Poems is one way of showing it. keep it up^^

it's pretty good. it defiantly gets the feeling across.

Not bad. Thx for sharing this as I know it was personal when you wrote it.

i write lots of poems, and it's always nice to share them, but mostly to hear other poems. i think people who write poems appreciate other poems much more. so thanks for posting it.

That's a pretty nice poem.

I'm not gonna lie, that was truly beautiful.

WOW, sweeet